The class finished their poems and wrote them up for display, whilst practising their handwriting.Thomas' poem was particularly good, as he chose his vocabulary carefully to entertain his reader and used his alliteration well.
Nature's numbers -
One optimistic, obedient otter,
Two tame, talented turtles,
Three teenage, technological tortoises,
Four freaky, ferocious fish,
Five filthy, fierce frogs,
Six sane, sacred salmon,
Seven sophisticated, senior stingrays,
Eight extravagant, eager elephants,
Nine nocturnal, nosy newts.
by Thomas Davies
Sunday, 7 September 2014
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